On 2015-07-23 12:50, Paul Cotton wrote:
Editorial comments:
Changes applied (except for a couple where I reworded the sentence or
replaced it)
When an image is decorative and it is the author's intent that it not
convey any information -> When an image is decorative and it is the
author's intent that it not conveys any information
Come on, you can do the subjunctive, Paul! :-)
(I wouldn't have used wording like this at all, and if this example
stays I'll rewrite it, so I'm glad you brought it to my attention. Very
few authors are _trying_ to make things meaningless, except maybe in
deconstructive poetry or something, although we all manage it from time
to time)
Thanks again.
Liam
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Liam Quin, W3C
XML Activity Lead;
Digital publishing; HTML Accessibility
