Dear Rashid Sangi. Thanks for your valuable comments.
I think that the comments are reasonable and they are useful. In the revision of the draft, I will reflect the comments. Best regards. Yong-Geun. On Tue, May 17, 2016 at 6:37 PM, AbdurRashidSangi <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Yong-Geun, > > > > As per my understanding after quick review, following are some editorial > and further explanation of some details you mentioned in the draft: > > > > 1. 3.2. first para: better further define IPSS or completely exclude it. > > 2. 3.3. third para: "Portable Parts (PP) attached" - instead of - "PP > attached". > > 3. 4. Design Space. first and second para: incorrect reference of "RFC > 6558" - instead of - "RFC 6568" > > 4. 5.1. first para: suitably rephrasing "However, the person data" to let > suppose "However, the personal data, which pose serious issues if > mishandled while transferred in wireless domain, can be securely > transferred by NFC technology". > > 5. 5.3. Reliability & QoS: "Latency of *SENSOR READINGS*" should be low > for". > > 6. 5.4. first para: "communications" - instead of - "communicatios". > > 7. 5.5. first para: "Therefore, the use case of LTE MTC could be used in > LPWAN" - instead of - "Therefore, the use....". > > 8. 5.5. example: if you are referring to connectivity between end device > and LPWAN gateway, how about using the term "fronthaul" instead of > "backhaul"? > > 9. 5.5. example: "star of star topology" - instead of - "star of stat > topology". > > 10. 5.5. example: Maximum data rate is mentioned for LoRa; keeping the > consideration of bandwidth aggregation recently proposed in > "draft-qin-lpwan-dau-00" would be better. > > > > Afterward, we can keep rephrasing the sentence that requires some > modifications. > > > > Hope you find the suggestions, useful. > > > > Thanks. > > Rashid Sangi, > > Huawei, Beijing, China. > > > > > > *From:* 6lo [mailto:[email protected]] *On Behalf Of *Samita > Chakrabarti > *Sent:* 2016年5月14日 8:41 > *To:* [email protected] > *Subject:* Re: [6lo] Call for 6lo Deployment Scenario Document phone > meeting > > > > > > PS: Please update the Doodle poll for your preference on attendance. [ for > next week] > > http://doodle.com/poll/y9akcyphnrtvwusa > > > > > > Please reply only to ‘[email protected]’. [ Else the mail administrator > complains about too many recipients] > > > > Thanks, > > -Samita > > > > *From:* Samita Chakrabarti > *Sent:* Friday, May 13, 2016 5:28 PM > *To:* Yong-Geun Hong ([email protected]); [email protected]; > Thomas Watteyne ([email protected]); [email protected]; Carsten > Bormann ([email protected]); Mohit Sethi M; [email protected]; > 'Das, Subir'; '[email protected]'; '[email protected]'; > Alexander Pelov ([email protected]); Gabriel Montenegro ( > [email protected]) > *Cc:* [email protected] > *Subject:* Call for 6lo Deployment Scenario Document phone meeting > > > > Hello All: > > > > At Buenos Aires, we had a very productive discussion on updating > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hong-6lo-use-cases/ > > In order to use it more for guidance to other IETF WGs and external SDO as > to how 6lo WG technologies might be useful to yet another L2 networks that > are serving constrained devices. > > The document already discusses different parameters for different > technologies and typical deployment. > > > > The goal is to improve the document and present it as an 6lo > Applicability document for others to know how to use this technology. > > > > Yong-Geun is heading this effort and he might need some extra hands to > help him out. > > > > I plan to arrange a phone meeting next week (Wed/Thurs) @7am PDT to > discuss: > > > > · Outline proposal of the updated document > > · Nail down the usecase scenarios > > > > Thanks, > > -Samita > > > > > > PS: Please update the Doodle poll for your preference on attendance. > > http://doodle.com/poll/y9akcyphnrtvwusa > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > 6lo mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo > >
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