Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-6lo-dect-ule-08: No Record
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-dect-ule/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I agree with Alissa's comments. Otherwise, I just have a few nits: - Abstract: Please expand DECT. - section 1: The section could benefit from some paragraph breaks. - 3.2, first paragraph: s/ "implements already fragmentation"/"already implements fragmentation" -- 4th paragraph: s/"PP each have"/"each PP has" _______________________________________________ 6lo mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo
