Hi Yong-Geun,
This version is clearer. Thanks for your hard work on this draft. I quickly
went through this draft just now and found several minor flaws:
1. Abstract
'PLC (IEEE 1901)'. Here it's better to use 1901.2 because 1901.2 is
narrowband PLC, closer to 6lo
2. section 1, paragraph 1.
Link is missed for [RFC7228]
3. subsection 3.9, table 2.
"Tree No Mesh" for PLC. Mesh topology in PLC has been studied for several
years and has its deployment. I would suggest to say star, tree, mesh.
Security Reqmt: 'High'. You missed one 'H'
Links are missed for "6lo-nfc" and "hou-6lo-plc"
4. subsection 4.1
'QOS' -> 'QoS'. Second-to-last bullet in page 10
'ICPMv6' -> 'ICMPv6'. Second bullet in page 11
Regards,
Jianqiang
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Subject: [6lo] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Networks of Resource-constrained
Nodes of the IETF.
Title : IPv6 over Constrained Node Networks (6lo)
Applicability & Use cases
Authors : Yong-Geun Hong
Carles Gomez
Abdur Rashid Sangi
Take Aanstoot
Samita Chakrabarti
Filename : draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02.txt
Pages : 26
Date : 2017-07-03
Abstract:
This document describes the applicability of IPv6 over constrained
node networks (6lo) and provides practical deployment examples. In
addition to IEEE 802.15.4, various link layer technologies such as
ITU-T G.9959 (Z-Wave), BLE, DECT-ULE, MS/TP, NFC, PLC (IEEE 1901),
and IEEE 802.15.4e (6tisch) are used as examples. The document
targets an audience who like to understand and evaluate running end-
to-end IPv6 over the constrained link layer networks connecting
devices to each other or to each cloud.
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/
There are also htmlized versions available at:
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02
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