Dear Jianqiang HOU. Thanks for your quick review and several comments.
In this updated version, many parts were updated. Please, see my response inline. On Mon, Jul 3, 2017 at 9:46 PM, houjianqiang <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Yong-Geun, > > This version is clearer. Thanks for your hard work on this draft. I > quickly went through this draft just now and found several minor flaws: > > 1. Abstract > 'PLC (IEEE 1901)'. Here it's better to use 1901.2 because 1901.2 is > narrowband PLC, closer to 6lo > [Hong] In my knowledge, besides IEEE1901.2, IEEE 1901.1 is also related to 6lo because it can be used for smart grid and it is called PLC-IoT. As you said, if we focus a narrowband PLC, you are right. But, if we don't focus narrowband, IEEE 1901.2 is also a candidate. I will discuss with other export of PLC and find the best way to describe. > 2. section 1, paragraph 1. > Link is missed for [RFC7228] > [Hong] O.K. It will be fixed in a next revision. > 3. subsection 3.9, table 2. > "Tree No Mesh" for PLC. Mesh topology in PLC has been studied for > several years and has its deployment. I would suggest to say star, tree, > mesh. > Security Reqmt: 'High'. You missed one 'H' > Links are missed for "6lo-nfc" and "hou-6lo-plc" > [Hong] O.K. the proposed topology of PLC looks good and I will update. The link of 6lo-nfc is located in clause 3.5. The link of hou-6lo-plc will be added. 4. subsection 4.1 > 'QOS' -> 'QoS'. Second-to-last bullet in page 10 > 'ICPMv6' -> 'ICMPv6'. Second bullet in page 11 > [Hong] O.K. These will be fixed in a next revision. > > Regards, > Jianqiang > > > -----Original Message----- > From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Monday, July 03, 2017 5:07 PM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: [6lo] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Networks of > Resource-constrained Nodes of the IETF. > > Title : IPv6 over Constrained Node Networks (6lo) > Applicability & Use cases > Authors : Yong-Geun Hong > Carles Gomez > Abdur Rashid Sangi > Take Aanstoot > Samita Chakrabarti > Filename : draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02.txt > Pages : 26 > Date : 2017-07-03 > > Abstract: > This document describes the applicability of IPv6 over constrained > node networks (6lo) and provides practical deployment examples. In > addition to IEEE 802.15.4, various link layer technologies such as > ITU-T G.9959 (Z-Wave), BLE, DECT-ULE, MS/TP, NFC, PLC (IEEE 1901), > and IEEE 802.15.4e (6tisch) are used as examples. The document > targets an audience who like to understand and evaluate running end- > to-end IPv6 over the constrained link layer networks connecting > devices to each other or to each cloud. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-02 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at > tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > >
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