Hello Yong-Geun, I've reviewed the latest version of the draft, and it looks great.
I have some editorial comments for your consideration: - Considering the current outline, the chapter 4 seems to be incomplete, because it covers only the PLCs. With the title "6lo Deployment Scenarios", it is expected to cover other low power technologies as well. Another solution could be, moving the current text to PLC related sections, e.g. the section 3.6 or the section 6.6. - In the chapter 5, for the bullet "Mesh or L3 routing", it would be better to have an example for mesh routing at L2, e.g. LOADng in G3 plc. Thanks again for your great efforts on the draft. Best regards, Remy _______________________________________________ 6lo mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo
