Dear authors,
I went through the draft and felt it is easily readable and well structured.
Thanks for the effort! There are few points I wish to mention.
- Refer to Section 5 "Guidelines for adopting IPv6 stack (6lo/6LoWPAN)".
- Since the draft is about 6Lo, like other sections, it is better to use
only 6Lo in the section title just for consistency.
- Certain parts of the same section requires a bit of rewording so that the
reader feels it is a 6Lo document rather than a summary of 6LoWPAN
protocols.
I know that the intention of the authors is to convey that the existing
6LoWPAN
standards can be considered and adopted to 6Lo.
- For 6Lo networks that use wired link layer technologies, a short
note on whether and how 6LoWPAN can possibly be adopted helps.
- The emergence of BACnet IP as an alternative for BACnet MS/TP cannot be
ignored. Considering the current and future trend, why the latter is still
relevant
needs to be captured in the document to motivate the reader.
- Refer to 6.2 "Use case of Bluetooth LE: Smartphone-based Interaction"
- The need for 6Lo for this use-case is not coming out clearly. It would be
good to explain.
Hope the above inputs help!
Regards
Anand
On Sun, Oct 04, 2020 at 12:32:50PM +0530, Shwetha wrote:
>
> This initiates a 2nd WGLC on the use-cases and applicability draft:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/
>
> The first WGLC initiated in November 2018 didn't conclude due to lack of
> responses. However the workgroup has reviewed the latest revisions and
> authors have addressed the comments in -09 pending one comment
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6lo/Ib4P3Zq-CCf6Ye4uKLU-NIHlp_I/#
>
> As per the discussion at the 6lo session during IETF 108, this starts a WGLC.
> This WGLC will conclude in two weeks on Monday October 19th.
>
> Please send your comments to evaluate progressing this draft.
>
> Thanks,
> Shwetha
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