---------- Forwarded message --------- From: Kerry Lynn <[email protected]> Date: Mon, Oct 19, 2020 at 7:19 PM Subject: Re: [6lo] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases To: Shwetha <[email protected]>
Dears Chairs and authors, Here are some comments on the draft. In general the document is well-structured and readable and I hope it proves to be useful. Page 3 As Pascal points out s/6LoPWAN/6LoWPAN/ in four places. s/make the need/create the need/ s/are uniquely different from/expand upon/ I think the point here is that the different 6lo link layers are uniquely suited to different applications? Page 4 s/wire/wired/ Section 3.4 (page 6) Please delete the last sentence as it basically repeats the first sentence. Regards, Kerry Lynn On Sun, Oct 4, 2020 at 3:03 AM Shwetha <[email protected]> wrote: > This initiates a 2nd WGLC on the use-cases and applicability draft: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/ > > The first WGLC initiated in November 2018 didn't conclude due to lack of > responses. However the workgroup has reviewed the latest revisions and > authors have addressed the comments in -09 pending one comment > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6lo/Ib4P3Zq-CCf6Ye4uKLU-NIHlp_I/# > > As per the discussion at the 6lo session during IETF 108, this starts a > WGLC. This WGLC will conclude in two weeks on Monday October 19th. > > Please send your comments to evaluate progressing this draft. > > Thanks, > Shwetha > _______________________________________________ > 6lo mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo >
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