Hi Robert, Thank you very much for your feedback, and apologies for the late response.
We just published an updated version of the draft (revision -10). Please find below our inline responses to your comments: > Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-09: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Hi, > > Thank you for this document. > > A couple of minor comments relating to the diagram in 3.2 (figure 2): > > (1) It wasn't clear to me why the top left node was a 6LR rather than a > 6LN. > If this is deliberate, it might be worth a sentence to explain the purpose > here. This was actually deliberate, to show that such scenario may occur and it is supported. As per your suggestion, we added a sentence in the paragraph after Figure 2, as follows: NEW: Note that, in some scenarios, and/or for some time intervals, a 6LR may remain at the edge of the network (e.g. the top left node in Figure 2). This may happen when a 6LR has no neighboring 6LNs. > (2) I initially found the bubble around the v6 Mesh to be confusing > - I > thought that it means that all the nodes are interconnected. I'm not sure > whether the bubble really helps the diagram, and probably could be > removed, of > if it is kept, I would suggest adding more space between the bubble line > and > the mesh network inside so that the bubble line isn't confused as > representing > links between the nodes. As per your suggestion, we removed the bubble for greater clarity. Thanks, Carles (on behalf of the authors) > Regards, > Rob > > > > _______________________________________________ > 6lo mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo > _______________________________________________ 6lo mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo
