Thanks Shoichi, I will change the two terminologies as your suggestion. :) (This specification ==> This document, Multihop ==> Multi-hop)
Thanks for your support, Eunah On Sat, Jul 31, 2010 at 4:23 AM, Shoichi Sakane <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi, > > I have reviewed this draft. I think it shows very good example and > information to be worth for the implementers and the designers > of LoWPAN networks. I thank the authors. > > With minor modifications that I listed below, this document must > be ready to go. > > - "This specification" used in section 1.1 sounds unreasonable to me. > It would be better to change into "This document", which is used > many other places. > > - "Multihop communication" used in section 3.5.1 has any special meaning ? > If not, just use "Multi-hop communication" that is used other places. > > - I attached a diff file for fixing typos. > > Shoichi Sakane > > On 07/28/10 22:52, Carsten Bormann wrote: >> >> LoWPANners, >> >> as you know, the working group chairs dropped the ball on the usecases >> document. >> A version with fixes resulting from the WGLC issued on 2009-01-09 was >> submitted on 2009-10-02. We wanted to get some quick feedback on >> whether that was fixing the issues and then never actually issued the >> second working-group last call. Indeed, the Internet-Draft expired >> after six months... Then the terminology of the ND draft changed. >> Since the usecases draft now has been resubmitted with updated >> terminology: >> >> This is a Working-Group Last-Call for: >> >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6lowpan-usecases-06 >> >> The document is intended to be submitted by this Working Group to the >> IESG for publication as an Informational Document. >> >> This is a one-week Working-Group Last-Call, ending on 2010-08-09 >> (Monday, August 09, 2010) at 2359 UTC. >> >> Please review the document carefully (one last time), and send your >> comments to the 6lowpan list. Please also indicate in your response >> whether or not you think this document is ready to go to the IESG. >> >> Carsten and Geoff >> >> _______________________________________________ >> 6lowpan mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan > > _______________________________________________ > 6lowpan mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan > > _______________________________________________ 6lowpan mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan
