Hi Guys, I had a couple of comments on the recent -07 terminology draft:
Deterministic Network - "A deterministic network can allocates..." should be "A deterministic network can allocate..." "6top Data Convey Model" - Model describing how the 6top adaptation layer...<snip> Is this really an adaptation layer? - In the IETF, the term "adaptation layer" has come to mean something different 6p Transaction - "Part of the 6top Protocol, in consists in" should probably be "...consists of" "Bundle" - typo "usining" should be "using" "Link" - When I read this description, it sounds similar to an interference domain - should the difference (if any) be spelled out or distinguished ? Or am I the only one that sees this similarity? Thanks! R.
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