Randy, I'll let Maria Rita comment about the typos, I assume it's just a matter to spinning the doc.
About "link", I went back to read the draft. The following definition... ------------------ A communication facility or medium over which nodes can communicate at the link layer, i.e., the layer immediately below IP. Thus, the IETF parlance for the term "Link" is adopted, as opposed to the IEEE802.15.4e terminology. In the context of the 6TiSCH architecture, which applies to Low Power Lossy Networks (LLNs), an IPv6 subnet is usually not congruent to a single link and techniques such as IPv6 Neighbor Discovery Proxying are used to achieve reachability within the multilink subnet. A link is distinct from a track. In fact, link local addresses are not expected to be used over a track for end to end communication. Finally, from the Layer 3 perspective (where the inner complexities of TSCH operations are hidden to enable classical IP routing and forwarding), a single radio interface may be seen as a number of Links with different capabilities for unicast or multicast services. --------------- ... is confusing, to say the least. IMO, it touches on almost all of the IETF work (talking about ND proxy, mutiling subnets, tracks in the definition of link ?!?) , is incredibly confusing, and as a result carries 0 information. What about A link exists between two nodes when at least one cell is schedule between them. Thomas On Mon, Apr 18, 2016 at 8:38 PM, Turner, Randy <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Guys, > > > > I had a couple of comments on the recent -07 terminology draft: > > > > Deterministic Network - "A deterministic network can allocates..." should > be "A deterministic network can allocate..." > > > > "6top Data Convey Model" - Model describing how the 6top adaptation > layer...<snip> > > Is this really an adaptation layer? - In the IETF, the term "adaptation > layer" has come to mean something different > > > > 6p Transaction - "Part of the 6top Protocol, in consists in" should > probably be "...consists of" > > > > "Bundle" - typo "usining" should be "using" > > > > "Link" – When I read this description, it sounds similar to an > interference domain - should the difference (if any) be spelled out or > distinguished ? Or am I the only one that sees this similarity? > > > > Thanks! > R. > > _______________________________________________ > 6tisch mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch > > -- _______________________________________ Thomas Watteyne, PhD Research Scientist & Innovator, Inria Sr Networking Design Eng, Linear Tech Founder & co-lead, UC Berkeley OpenWSN Co-chair, IETF 6TiSCH www.thomaswatteyne.com _______________________________________
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