#51: Proposed Editorial changes

 - the many acronyms (BEA, COBU, NIBR,NOB, AP, etc) add confusion more than
 clarity. Can we not simply talk about "incoming", "outgoing" and
 "generated"?

 - isn't "NOB=NIBR-COBU", not "NOB=COBU+NIBR"

 - the draft starts very abruptly by referencing triggering events, BEA and
 allocation policy in the "Rules for Adding/Deleting Cells" Section.
 "Overview" section?

 - "The SF0 Allocation Policy" figure

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     Type:  defect                   |     Status:  new
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Ticket URL: <https://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/6tisch/trac/ticket/51>
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