#51: Proposed Editorial changes
Comment (by [email protected]): Replying to [ticket:51 diego.dujovne@…]: > - the many acronyms (BEA, COBU, NIBR,NOB, AP, etc) add confusion more than clarity. Can we not simply talk about "incoming", "outgoing" and "generated"? Solved: instead of "generated cells" -> "effectively used cells". > > - isn't "NOB=NIBR-COBU", not "NOB=COBU+NIBR" Solved: None of those acronyms are used anymore. > > - the draft starts very abruptly by referencing triggering events, BEA and allocation policy in the "Rules for Adding/Deleting Cells" Section. "Overview" section? Solved: Improved introduction. > > - "The SF0 Allocation Policy" figure Solved: Corrected figure. -- -------------------------------------+------------------------------------- Reporter: | Owner: [email protected] | [email protected] Type: defect | Status: assigned Priority: minor | Milestone: Component: 6top-sf0 | Version: Severity: - | Resolution: Keywords: | -------------------------------------+------------------------------------- Ticket URL: <https://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/6tisch/trac/ticket/51#comment:2> 6tisch <https://tools.ietf.org/6tisch/> IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e _______________________________________________ 6tisch mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch
