Dear Adam, today we published a new version of the draft including the changes mentioned in our responses.
thanks for the provided reviews. Xavi 2018-04-09 5:51 GMT+02:00 Xavi Vilajosana Guillen <[email protected]>: > Dear Adam, thanks so much for your comments. Find inline (XV:) our > responses. > > All changes will be published in the upcoming version of the draft. > > many thanks for your review. > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> COMMENT: >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> Thanks to everyone who worked on this document. I have a handful of minor, >> editorial suggestions. >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------ >> --------------- >> >> Please expand TSCH and 2TiSCH in the Abstract. >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------ >> --------------- >> >> §3.1.1: >> >> > 5. The SF running on node B selects 2 out of the 3 cells from the >> > CellList of the 6P ADD Request. Node B locks those cells in it >> >> nit: "its" >> >> > schedule until the transmission is successfull (i.e. node B >> >> nit: "successful" >> > > XV: corrected. Thanks. > >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------ >> --------------- >> >> §3.3.1: >> >> > be used), or partially succeed (less than NumCells cells from the >> >> Nit: "fewer than" rather than "less than." >> >> XV: corrected. Thanks. > >> ------------------------------------------------------------ >> --------------- >> >> §3.3.2: >> >> > o The CellList in a 6P Request (2-step transaction) or 6P Response >> > (3-step transaction) MUST either be empty, contain exactly >> > NumCells cells, or more than NumCells cells. The case where the >> > CellList is not empty but contains less than NumCells cells is not >> > supported. >> >> nit: "...fewer than..." >> >> It would be a good idea to clearly indicate what a recipient of a message >> with a >> non-empty CellList with fewer entries than NumCells requires should do. >> This is >> also applicable for the "Candidate CellList" for RELOCATE. I can't find >> equivalent language for ADD -- is it okay for a message to (for example) >> have a >> NumCells value of 3, but include only 2 cells in its CellList? >> >> > XV: Thanks for this comment. Other reviewers also pointed out this issue. > We suggest to add this sentence: > > "The case where the CellList is not empty but contains fewer than NumCells > cells is not supported. > RC_ERR_CELLLIST code MUST be returned when the CellList contains fewer > than NumCells cells. " > >> ------------------------------------------------------------ >> --------------- >> >> §3.3.3: >> >> > verification on Candidate CellList can succeed (NumCells cells from >> > the Candidate CellList can be used), fail (none of the cells from the >> > Candidate CellList can be used) or partially succeed (less than >> > NumCells cells from the Candidate CellList can be used). In all >> >> >> nit: "...fewer than..." >> >> XV: corrected. Thanks. > >> ------------------------------------------------------------ >> --------------- >> >> §3.3.5: >> >> > MaxNumCells: The maximum number of cells to be listed. Node B MAY >> > return less than MaxNumCells cells, for example if MaxNumCells >> > cells do not fit in the frame. >> >> nit: "...fewer than..." >> >> > If node B has less than Offset cells that match the request, node B >> > returns an empty CellList and a Code field set to RC_EOL. >> >> nit: "...fewer than..." >> >> >> XV: corrected. Thanks. > >> _______________________________________________ >> 6tisch mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch >> > > > > -- > Dr. Xavier Vilajosana > Wireless Networks Lab > > *Internet Interdisciplinary Institute (IN3)Professor* > (+34) 646 633 681 > [email protected] <[email protected]> > http://xvilajosana.org > http://wine.rdi.uoc.edu > Parc Mediterrani de la Tecnologia > Av Carl Friedrich Gauss 5, B3 Building > <https://maps.google.com/?q=Av+Carl+Friedrich+Gauss+5,+B3+Building+08860+Castelldefels+(Barcelona).+Catalonia.+Spain&entry=gmail&source=g> > 08860 Castelldefels (Barcelona). Catalonia. Spain > <https://maps.google.com/?q=Av+Carl+Friedrich+Gauss+5,+B3+Building+08860+Castelldefels+(Barcelona).+Catalonia.+Spain&entry=gmail&source=g> > [image: Universitat Oberta de Catalunya] > > -- Dr. Xavier Vilajosana Wireless Networks Lab *Internet Interdisciplinary Institute (IN3)Professor* (+34) 646 633 681 [email protected] <[email protected]> http://xvilajosana.org http://wine.rdi.uoc.edu Parc Mediterrani de la Tecnologia Av Carl Friedrich Gauss 5, B3 Building 08860 Castelldefels (Barcelona). Catalonia. Spain [image: Universitat Oberta de Catalunya]
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