Thanks for the follow-up! The changes relating to my comments all look
good to me.
/a
On 6/21/18 5:45 AM, Xavi Vilajosana Guillen wrote:
Dear Adam,
today we published a new version of the draft including the changes
mentioned in our responses.
thanks for the provided reviews.
Xavi
2018-04-09 5:51 GMT+02:00 Xavi Vilajosana Guillen <xvilajos...@uoc.edu
<mailto:xvilajos...@uoc.edu>>:
Dear Adam, thanks so much for your comments. Find inline (XV:) our
responses.
All changes will be published in the upcoming version of the draft.
many thanks for your review.
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COMMENT:
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Thanks to everyone who worked on this document. I have a
handful of minor,
editorial suggestions.
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Please expand TSCH and 2TiSCH in the Abstract.
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§3.1.1:
> 5. The SF running on node B selects 2 out of the 3 cells
from the
> CellList of the 6P ADD Request. Node B locks those
cells in it
nit: "its"
> schedule until the transmission is successfull (i.e. node B
nit: "successful"
XV: corrected. Thanks.
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§3.3.1:
> be used), or partially succeed (less than NumCells cells
from the
Nit: "fewer than" rather than "less than."
XV: corrected. Thanks.
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§3.3.2:
> o The CellList in a 6P Request (2-step transaction) or 6P
Response
> (3-step transaction) MUST either be empty, contain exactly
> NumCells cells, or more than NumCells cells. The case
where the
> CellList is not empty but contains less than NumCells
cells is not
> supported.
nit: "...fewer than..."
It would be a good idea to clearly indicate what a recipient
of a message with a
non-empty CellList with fewer entries than NumCells requires
should do. This is
also applicable for the "Candidate CellList" for RELOCATE. I
can't find
equivalent language for ADD -- is it okay for a message to
(for example) have a
NumCells value of 3, but include only 2 cells in its CellList?
XV: Thanks for this comment. Other reviewers also pointed out this
issue. We suggest to add this sentence:
"The case where the CellList is not empty but contains fewer than
NumCells cells is not supported.
RC_ERR_CELLLIST code MUST be returned when the CellList contains
fewer than NumCells cells. "
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§3.3.3:
> verification on Candidate CellList can succeed (NumCells
cells from
> the Candidate CellList can be used), fail (none of the
cells from the
> Candidate CellList can be used) or partially succeed (less than
> NumCells cells from the Candidate CellList can be used).
In all
nit: "...fewer than..."
XV: corrected. Thanks.
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§3.3.5:
> MaxNumCells: The maximum number of cells to be listed.
Node B MAY
> return less than MaxNumCells cells, for example if
MaxNumCells
> cells do not fit in the frame.
nit: "...fewer than..."
> If node B has less than Offset cells that match the
request, node B
> returns an empty CellList and a Code field set to RC_EOL.
nit: "...fewer than..."
XV: corrected. Thanks.
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