These changes are at:
https://bitbucket.org/6tisch/6tisch-join-enhanced-beacon/commits/0a806e63e65f2ef0fe2c4a5086b653d9fb0c3ff6
and will be in -13 to be posted in a few minutes.Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > -- Abstract -- "announce the presence of the network" makes me > wonder... Do nodes announce the network ? or do nodes announced THEIR > presence in the network ? or do router nodes announce the network? or > am I too unfamiliar with TSCH ? I have changed the Abstract to say "routers announce". Noting that in a 6tisch world, most things are routers. > -- Section 1.2 -- Please expand "ASN" at first use. I guess that this > is not the usual AS Number ;-) > -- Section 1.3 -- Please add a reference for "broadcast aloha slot". > Isn't the word "IETF" in "defines a new IETF Information Element (IE)" > redundant in an IETF document ? The name of the Registry is: https://www.iana.org/assignments/ieee-std-802.15.4-ietf-ie-subtype-ids/ieee-std-802.15.4-ietf-ie-subtype-ids.xhtml#ieee-std-802.15.4-ietf-ie-subtype-ids-1 IEEE Std 802.15.4 IETF IE Subtype IDs I expanded the IE. > -- Section 2 -- "that need addressing via unicast Router Solicitation > messages" is unclear to me... Is to do SLAAC ? or look for an actual > router? Yes, the point is to avoid multicast RS/RAs. If for reason, the announcing node is *not* a router, it should not set the R bit. Otherwise, it will answer unicast RS. > Add a reference + acronym expansion to RPL at first use. Done. > "This field provides the suffix (IID)" please expand interface ID and, > on my side, I do not like naming the IID as a suffix. I will remove the word suffix, and just say "Interface ID" > -- Section 5 -- Reading and applying RFC 8126 (how to write IANA > considerations) would be beneficial. okay, I'll review it again and fix this to the standard way. > == NITS == > -- Abstract -- Suggest to expand TSCH at first use. I'm always uncomfortable with expansions in the Abstract, but I'll do that. > -- Section 1.3 -- Unsure whether "reasons: First, there" should have a > capitalized "First". I'll remove First :-) > There are also many acronyms that should be expanded at first use (I > stopped commenting about those). okay, I'll check again and make sure. -- ] Never tell me the odds! | ipv6 mesh networks [ ] Michael Richardson, Sandelman Software Works | network architect [ ] [email protected] http://www.sandelman.ca/ | ruby on rails [
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