Thanks for updating. Rob
> -----Original Message----- > From: iesg <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Michael Richardson > Sent: 20 February 2020 12:55 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; Pascal Thubert (pthubert) > <[email protected]>; draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced- > [email protected]; The IESG <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: [6tisch] RobWilton review of draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment- > enhanced-beacon-13 > > > Rob Wilton (rwilton) <[email protected]> wrote: > > 1. Move the following paragraph from the end of the introduction > near > > to the top of the introduction, i.e. after the first introduction > > paragraph. > > A good idea, thank you. > > > This document defines a new IETF Information Element (IE) subtype > to > > place into the Enhanced Beacon (EB) to provide join and enrollment > > information to prospective pledges in a more efficient way. > > > > 2. Add some additional text, something like the following before the > > section 1.1: > > > "The following sub-sections explain the problem being solved, which > > justify carrying the join and enrollement information in the EB." > > will be done in -14. > > -- > Michael Richardson <[email protected]>, Sandelman Software Works -= > IPv6 IoT consulting =- > > _______________________________________________ 6tisch mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch
