Dear Rhys, Well spotted. For the next round we hope to do a general terminology cleanup (much of that is already done).
Thanks for your contribution, Eliot On 2/10/11 6:14 PM, Rhys Smith wrote: >> Hi everyone, >> >> We give to you the holiday present of reading ;-) The authors have updated >> The ABFAB Architecture Draft. It contains a number of changes since -00: >> • A high level step by step description of the process. >> • A "swimming lane" diagram visually demonstrating that process. >> • A discussion about channel binding and appropriate EAP methods. >> • A discussion about discovery. > Think it's looking pretty good in general, and agree with general comments > made so far. > > One specific comment that I don't think anybody else has made yet - the > document variously refers to: > * End Host > * Client App > * Application > * Subject > * Principal > * Entity > > - sometimes meaning the same thing, sometimes different things. > > Where the document is using the very specific meaning of one term (e.g. > subject vs principal) that should probably be clarified somewhere > (terminology section?) and where it isn't using the term with that specific > meaning attached then the document should pick one and stick with it for > consistency. > > Best Regards, > R. > -- > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > Dr Rhys Smith e: [email protected] > Engineering Consultant: Identity & Access Management (GPG:0xDE2F024C) > Information Services, > Cardiff University, t: +44 (0) 29 2087 0126 > 39-41 Park Place, Cardiff, f: +44 (0) 29 2087 4285 > CF10 3BB, United Kingdom. m: +44 (0) 7968 087 821 > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > _______________________________________________ > abfab mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/abfab > _______________________________________________ abfab mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/abfab
