Hi Peter, Thank you for your comments! We have addressed them in the latest version -04 :
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-oscore-04 Please, see some more details in line below. Best, /Marco On 2019-11-19 10:12, Peter van der Stok wrote: > Hi Authors, > > Having read the document and comparing it with ace-key-groupcomm, I > have to agree with Jim that this document repeats in "other" words the > same subjects as specified in ace-key-groupcomm. > In this form, it is very difficult to find out the differences between > the two documents. > <MT> We shortened this document, to avoid repetitions and rather have simple pointers to ace-key-groupcomm , where especially general content not strictly related to the Group OSCORE case has been moved to. </MT> > It would be good if the same terminology was used or their equivalence > was pointed out: > eg: Client vs joining node <MT> Section 2 now clarifies that the joining node is the Client of ace-key-groupcomm. </MT> > Group-manager versus KDC <MT> Section 2 now clarifies that the Group Manager is the KDC of ace-key-groupcomm, as a Resource Server. </MT> > joining request versus joining authorization <MT> "Joining authorization" is not used anymore. After Section 4.1 "Token POST", authorization aspects such validation of requests against a stored Access Token are referred as in ace-key-groupcomm </MT> > > Secondly, I suggest to make this draft much shorter, and mostly refer > to the sections of ace-key-groupcomm and point out the differences. In > many cases a list of items that MUST be present, are optional or not > present at all will suffice. > For example such an enumeration is done under the bullet key on page 15. > <MT> We have tried to keep only the details and deltas from ace-key-groupcomm , and increased the usage of bullet lists. <MT> > New parameters can receive more text as is done for cs_alg, cs_params, > cs_key_params, and cs_key_enc. > <MT> Done, in Section 4.4. </MT> > Hope this helps, <MT> It does, as always. Thanks! </MT> > Thanks for all your work, > greetings, > > Peter > -- > > Peter van der Stok > vanderstok consultancy > mailto: [email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>, [email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]> > www: www.vanderstok.org <http://www.vanderstok.org> > tel NL: +31(0)492474673 F: +33(0)966015248 > > _______________________________________________ > Ace mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace -- Marco Tiloca Ph.D., Senior Researcher RISE Research Institutes of Sweden Division ICT Isafjordsgatan 22 / Kistagången 16 SE-164 40 Kista (Sweden) Phone: +46 (0)70 60 46 501 https://www.ri.se
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