Hi,

Here are some information I need to complete the shepherd:

A.  Do we have existing implementation or intention to implement it.

B. Can both co-authors confirm they are not aware of any IPR.

C. The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if

     it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords -- however, there's a paragraph with
     a matching beginning. Boilerplate error?

D.  .The draft uses .well-known/cmp. .well-known/cmp is indicated as
temporary [iana] and cmp-updates is still a draft. I am not sure we need to
wait for cmp-updates to be published, but if the draft is abandoned we may
need to indicate IANA that the cmp needs to be moved to permanent after
2022-05-20  - or may be at the publication of this draft. I suggest we add
a note in the IANA section which could be removed by IANA or the RFC
editor.

E. I am not sure the registration of pkiccmp does not need more
information. More especially, I see
https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/core-parameters.xhtml#content-formats
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7252.html#section-12.3

Please check what is needed and make sure the IANA is correct.

Yours,
Daniel
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