Sean, Thank you for this review! I'm preparing changes based on this feedback. For your #2 and #4 my preference is to cite the IANA registry as the authority with RFC 9174 as the secondary only because I want to treat RFC 9174 as an informative reference. It certainly informs the use case of this validation method but they shouldn't be seen as directly coupled; only through the PKIX OIDs on which they both depend.
On Wed, Sep 7, 2022 at 1:43 PM Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote: > Hi! Some comments: > > tl;dr: Let the experiment begin! > > # General > > I thought this document is well written and easy to follow. > > # Nits > > 1) s1: s/certificate authorities/Certification Authorities (CAs) > > 2) s2: I think maybe you can drop the IANA-SMI reference here: > > … identified by id-on-bundleEID of [IANA-SMI], consistent > with the requirements of Section 4.4.2.1 of [RFC9174]. > > RFC 9174 includes the OID and the semantics so unless you’re changing that > I think this text could be: > > … identified by id-on-bundleEID, consistent > with the requirements of Section 4.4.2.1 of [RFC9174]. > > 3) s3.3: r/[draft-ietf-cose-hash-algs]/[RFC9054] > > 4) s5: A better reference for id-kp-bundleSecurity would be [RFC9174], at > least I think it is because that’s where id-kp-bundleSecurity is defined. > > 5) s5.2: I think the last para needs a little tweaking. Just because a > client asks for signature only certificate for a DH key shouldn’t mean they > get it ;) Maybe something like, “Obviously, the request for signature-only > and encryption-only certificates is algorithm dependent” or something like > that. > > 6) Appendix A: I think you need to include text that states this Appendix > is a normative part of the specification. Often Appendices are considered > informative, but this one includes the definition of the CDDL. > > Cheers, > spt > > > On Aug 18, 2022, at 06:13, Deb Cooley <debcool...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > A reminder: we need a few more eyes on this draft to move it forward. > > > > Deb (and Yoav) > > > > On Thu, Jul 28, 2022 at 8:19 PM Deb Cooley <debcool...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Dear ACME, > > > > We need to get some eyes on this draft - draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid. If > you have time, please take a look and let us know whether you think it is > ready (or make comments). We are hoping to get this draft finished! > > > > Deb Cooley > > > > On Tue, May 24, 2022 at 5:29 PM Sipos, Brian J. <brian.si...@jhuapl.edu> > wrote: > > All, > > > > I haven’t seen any reviews of the last draft version -09. I hope that > the closer alignment with RFC 8823 makes its understanding and analysis > easier. > > > > > > > > From: Acme <acme-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Deb Cooley > > Sent: Tuesday, May 24, 2022 7:39 AM > > To: IETF ACME <acme@ietf.org>; Brian Sipos <brian.sipos+i...@gmail.com> > > Cc: Roman Danyliw <r...@cert.org>; Dorothy E Cooley < > deco...@radium.ncsc.mil> > > Subject: [EXT] Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-09.txt > > > > > > > > APL external email warning: Verify sender acme-boun...@ietf.org before > clicking links or attachments > > > > > > > > Did we ever get reviews on the updated draft? If not, can we get some > (or revive the) volunteers? > > > > > > > > Deb Cooley > > > > > > > > On Mon, Mar 21, 2022 at 7:12 AM Deb Cooley <debcool...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > It is on the agenda. We will ask for volunteers to review. > > > > > > > > Deb > > > > > > > > On Sun, Mar 20, 2022 at 5:29 PM Roman Danyliw <r...@cert.org> wrote: > > > > Hi! > > > > > > > > We’re past IETF LC in terms of document processing and -08 and -09 > appear to have changed protocol behavior. Since there hasn’t been any > discussion about this on the mailing list yet, I’d like to ask the WG to > review these changes ( > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-07&url2=draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-09). > Please raise any objections by Friday April 1. > > > > > > > > Helpfully, this document is on the ACME meeting agenda tomorrow at IETF > 113. > > > > > > > > Regards, > > > > Roman > > > > > > > > From: Acme <acme-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Brian Sipos > > Sent: Wednesday, March 2, 2022 11:27 PM > > To: IETF ACME <acme@ietf.org> > > Subject: Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-09.txt > > > > > > > > All, > > > > I have posted an update to the Node ID Validation document which updates > references to now-published DTN RFCs (yay!) and adds algorithm agility for > the Key Authorization Digest to avoid the validation method being stuck on > SHA-256. It does add a publication dependency on the COSE hash document, > but that is in AUTH48 (though it's been stuck in that state for some time > now). > > > > Comments are welcome and can be discussed at the next IETF. > > > > Brian S. > > > > > > > > On Wed, Mar 2, 2022 at 7:35 PM <internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote: > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Automated Certificate Management > Environment WG of the IETF. > > > > Title : Automated Certificate Management Environment > (ACME) Delay-Tolerant Networking (DTN) Node ID Validation Extension > > Author : Brian Sipos > > Filename : draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-09.txt > > Pages : 31 > > Date : 2022-03-02 > > > > Abstract: > > This document specifies an extension to the Automated Certificate > > Management Environment (ACME) protocol which allows an ACME server to > > validate the Delay-Tolerant Networking (DTN) Node ID for an ACME > > client. The DTN Node ID is encoded as a certificate Subject > > Alternative Name (SAN) of type otherName with a name form of > > BundleEID and as an ACME Identifier type "bundleEID". > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid/ > > > > There is also an HTML version available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-09.html > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-09 > > > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org: > :internet-drafts > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Acme mailing list > > Acme@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/acme > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Acme mailing list > > Acme@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/acme > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Acme mailing list > > Acme@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/acme > > _______________________________________________ > Acme mailing list > Acme@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/acme >
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