On Fri, Nov 17, 2023 at 5:01 AM Jean-Pierre Rosen <[email protected]> wrote:

> Le 17/11/2023 à 04:26, Randy Brukardt a écrit :
>
> I don't really like either of these, but something better seems doesn't seem
> easy to come up with.
>
> Or a simple swap:
> *Reason: *The Streams.Storage.Bounded package is provided in order to
> make available an alternative, *which gives more predictable memory
> usage,* to the Streams.Storage.Unbounded package.
>

Seems better.  I still find "is provided in order to make available an
alternative" in the "department of redundancy department"...  Also, the
placement of the "which" clause is still a bit awkward.  How about:

*Reason:* As an alternative to the Streams.Storage.Unbounded package, the
Streams.Storage.Bounded package is available, *which provides more
predictable memory usage.*

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> J-P. Rosen
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