On 22 March 2011 12:36, roomsearching <[email protected]> wrote:
> For a start, please simplify your sentences and don't make spirituality > into such a vague state that people mistake it for poetry instead of > spirituality. You may be a good poet but a poet is just a man suffering his > emotional rollercoaster and making a living out of writing those > experiences. I cannot disagree more poetry gives rise to a language which can convey the paradox of consciousness the sentences were clear should you choose to read them thoroughly and follow the logic I agree they could be made simpler thanks for the feedback
