Looks good, only comment is the first line of the third paragraph: "the response was from the group was" probably should be "the response from the group was"...
-- Larry Smith [email protected] On Mon October 31 2016 14:00, Chuck McCown wrote: > A good friend of mine makes a good living as a marketing consultant to > folks doing online sales etc. I have hired him to consult a few times over > the years. Lately he said that I need other content, a blog or social > media or something that provides expert content. He says that people need > to feel that you are an authoritative source of info for whatever crap you > are trying to sell. > > So based on the good advice always received here, I used WIX to do what I > think he was telling me to do. But now I am totally sick of looking at it. > I think the first effort contains some useful stuff, but it doesn’t really > matter what I think. > > If y’all could be kind enough to take a look and tell me how to make it > better I would appreciate it. I tried to stick to my AnimalFarm doctor > science theme... > > www.surge-protection.org
