On Fri, 2018-06-29 at 14:09 -0700, Kerim Aydin wrote: > But more to the point maybe this theme would end up as graybeard-only > which wasn't my intent (but that was great addition to the previous > memoirs Dave!) - I was thinking entries would be as much about judicial > procedure as the actual arguments, e.g. "your honor, the next Rule must > move to strike the evidence presented in a previous rule" and that kind > of thing. Maybe the theme needs tweaking?
I'd much prefer this to be entirely "in-character" and not refer to the fantasy rules themselves. Something as simple as "I move to strike the evidence. Here are my reasons:" and leaving someone else to finish the sentence would achieve the same thing as your example in a much more flavourful way. -- ais523
