Hi, I reviewed the draft and it looks ready for publication. Some nits:
1. The last sentence in section 1 can be removed. 2. "Furhermore, there might be situations in which the user whishes to override" to "Furthermore, there might be situations in which the user wishes to override" 3. section 3 start with "a" instead of "As" 4.section 4.1 second paragraph "unkown" should be "unknown" and third paragraph "usuable " should be "usable" Roni Even -----Original Message----- From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Vijay K. Gurbani Sent: 29 November, 2012 12:25 AM To: alto Subject: [alto] WGLC for draft-ietf-alto-server-discovery-06 [as chair] Folks: Based on conversations with the authors of the document and recent list discussions on the draft, we believe that the ALTO server discovery document is ready for WGLC. The current incarnation of the document is -06 and is available for review at http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-server-discovery-06 We urge the working group participants to perform a dedicated review of the document. Short statements in support of moving the work ahead, or statements that provide constructive solutions for any aspect lacking in the draft, are helpful. Please do post such statements on the list. This WGLC runs until Friday, December 14 2012. Thank you, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected] Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ _______________________________________________ alto mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto _______________________________________________ alto mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
