Hi Michael, Sebastian, Thanks a lot! We went ahead and made the changes. We will post these edits right after IETF.
Richard On Nov 1, 2013 3:22 PM, "Sebastian Kiesel" <[email protected]> wrote: > Michael, > > thanks for pointing this out. I agree, this should be changed. > > Sebastian > > On Fri, Nov 01, 2013 at 05:50:19PM +0000, Scharf, Michael (Michael) wrote: > > Hi all, > > > > As I already mentioned in the last IETF meeting, I suggest that > draft-ietf-alto-protocol does not refer to specific section numbers of > draft-ietf-alto-deployments. The numbers referenced by > draft-ietf-alto-protocol-20 are already outdated for > draft-ietf-alto-deployments-08, and further updates of the deployment draft > are likely (see below for one example). > > > > Specifically, I suggest to remove this tight coupling by the following > small changes: > > > > OLD: > > Section 10 of [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments] also discusses information > leakage from ALTO. > > > > NEW: > > [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments] also discusses information leakage from ALTO. > > > > > > OLD: > > Note that ALTO-specific monitoring and metrics are discussed in 6.3 of > [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments] and future versions of that document. > > > > NEW: > > Note that ALTO-specific monitoring and metrics are discussed in > [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments]. > > > > > > OLD: > > Both ALTO Service Providers and those using ALTO Clients should be aware > of the impact of incorrect or faked guidance (see Section 10.3 of > [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments] and future versions of that document). > > > > NEW: > > Both ALTO Service Providers and those using ALTO Clients should be aware > of the impact of incorrect or faked guidance (see > [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments]). > > > > > > OLD: > > Monitoring ALTO Servers and Clients is described in Section 6.3 of > [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments] and future versions of that document. > > > > NEW: > > Monitoring ALTO Servers and Clients is described in > [I-D.ietf-alto-deployments]. > > > > > > (The phrase "... and future versions of that document" could also stay.) > > > > > > As discussed on the list, a performance directorate review asked for > substantial changes of Section 6.3, which is explicitly references multiple > times. According to this review, the content of Section 6.3 will have to > change significantly before publication. > > > > Note that I moved the existing text from Section 6.3 in > draft-ietf-alto-deployments-07 into an appendix in > draft-ietf-alto-deployments-08, because I didn't have time to rewrite this > part of the document (-08 contains numerous other improvements). Probably, > -09 will have a reworded, dedicated section on monitoring in the main part > again, but the section number is TBD. > > > > Thanks > > > > Michael > > _______________________________________________ > > alto mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
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