Hi all, The text and proposed extension topics cover well the proposals and related concerns that have been discussed in the WG.
I would suggest two minor text additions, (referring at the version on http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/alto/trac/wiki/v0.1-recharter) Suggestion 1 - in paragraph 1: to reflect the will of ALTO to preserve network information confidentiality while expressing network provider preferences, I propose to insert text as follows: Current: "having access to a pair of maps: a topology map and a cost map." Proposed: "having access to a pair of maps +++ providing an abstracted view of the network infrastructure as seen by its operator +++ : a topology map and a cost map." Suggestion 2 - in extension item class "(Informational) A survey of techniques": to take into account the growing complexity of considered networks with the wireless use cases brought to the group, I propose to insert text (of item N° 2) as follows: Current: " ... that would facilitate advanced graph computation. ... " Proposed: " ... that would facilitate advanced graph computation +++ in (complex/)heterogeneous network environments +++. ... " Best regards, Sabine -----Message d'origine----- De : alto [mailto:[email protected]] De la part de Vijay K. Gurbani Envoyé : vendredi 21 février 2014 22:43 À : [email protected] Objet : Re: [alto] Text proposal for charter update On 02/21/2014 08:09 AM, Jan Seedorf wrote: > The text looks good to me and in my view reflects the agreement on > re-chartering in the ALTO WG. > > Just two small comments: > -- "where the host was a peer in a P2P network and desired to be > rendezvoused with other peers for file sharing" --> When talking about > the P2P use case I would not use past tense but present tense. > P2P is still out there and in principle the use case is technically > still a valid one. The text in past tense reads to me like ALTO has > extensively been used for this use case in the past (not really true), > and should not been used for P2P anymore (also not really > true) > -- "JSON-path" --> "JSON-patch" Jan: Good catch. Fixed both of these. The charter draft is available at the ALTO Wiki http://tools.ietf.org/wg/alto/trac/wiki Cheers, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected] Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq _______________________________________________ alto mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto _______________________________________________ alto mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
