Dear WG, The authors have gone ahead to fix the coupling issue between update stream and stream control. To allow the community to read what the document reads like, we have uploaded the newer version, which can be found at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse/ Please see version 12.
It is a much cleaner, modular, complete design. Last-call feedbacks, of course, are still highly appreciated and the authors will update as soon as possible, to improve on reactiveness. Thanks a lot! Richard On Mon, Jul 2, 2018 at 11:09 AM Vijay K. Gurbani <[email protected]> wrote: > Richard, one of them must provide a WGLC review for the draft. The WG > must to due diligence through dedicated reviews to ensure that the work > reflects the consensus of the WG. > > I will like to see new members to start contributing to the WG, as such > while my preference would be for Danny to review the draft and post WGLC > comments, I will leave it to the WG members to decide who will review it. > > I was hesitant to ask Sabine and Jensen since, in all fairness, they > have done their share of reviews and comments over the years. I > iterate, it would be great if other members of the WG step up to move > the work ahead. > > From a process point of view, I realize that the cutoff is today so I am > expecting that we will not be in time to submit a version. However, > that is fine as long as we have a WGLC on the currently submitted draft > by the time we have our meeting on Monday, Jul-16. > > After the meeting, I can do the proto-writeup and move the work ahead. > > Cheers, > > On 07/02/2018 09:46 AM, Y. Richard Yang wrote: > > Vijay, > > > > The ideas that I posted were discussed with Sabine, Jensen, and Danny, > > who are not co-authors of the document. > > > > I assume that they are busy today, as 8 pm ET today is IETF draft > > deadline. Maybe they can help with our review tomorrow (July 3) or the > > day after tomorrow (July 4), before the close :-) > > > > Thanks! > > Richard > > > > > > > > On Mon, Jul 2, 2018 at 9:34 AM Vijay K. Gurbani <[email protected] > > <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: > > > > Folks: Following up on Richard's email, we need a dedicated WGLC > review > > for SSE from the WG. Jan and I will like to invite at least one > person > > who is not an author to volunteer to review the draft as part of > WGLC. > > > > Thus far, besides Richard's email, there has not been any review or > > comments on the draft since it was released for WGLC. We will need > to > > be more proactive as a WG to move pending work ahead. > > > > Please send me and Jan a message on whether you are able to perform a > > review of the draft in short order so we can move it ahead > > expeditiously. > > > > Thank you, > > > > On 07/01/2018 10:32 PM, Y. Richard Yang wrote: > > > Dear WG, > > > > > > Thanks a lot for those who already sent comments to the authors! > As an > > > important service, this document can benefit from in-depth > reviews, as > > > Vijay pointed out. > > > > > > The main substantive comment so far is on clarifying the coupling > > > between the Update Stream Service (USS), which will be used by the > > > network to send SSE Update Messages to a client, and the Update > Stream > > > Control Service (USCS), which will be used by the client to > > control the > > > server, by sending add/remove of resources messages. In the current > > > design, SSE update messages can provide the final outcome of a > control > > > request. The comment was whether this is a generic design. > > > > > > After extensive discussions among the authors, we propose to make > the > > > following revisions---these revisions will be simple and clean, > and if > > > approved by the WG, they can be updated right away: > > > > > > M1. The document clarifies that USS uses a *modular* design, in > > that the > > > Update Stream Service (USS) is a modular service. Hence, it can be > > > controlled by not only USCS but also other potential control > channels, > > > such as a private control protocol. Hence, the messaging of USS, in > > > particular, its Control Update Messages, should be (slightly) > > revised to > > > reflect this spirit. > > > > > > M2. The document clarifies that USS uses a self-contained design, > to > > > take advantage that current design can be simply, elegantly > > extended to > > > also report error updates. > > > > > > The authors request that the WG approve these edits so that the > > authors > > > can proceed to submit a revision shortly, in just a couple days. > > > > > > Of course, the authors will also wait for other comments, until > > the July > > > 4th closing, to make a single, coherent edit. > > > > > > Thank you so much! > > > Richard > > > > > > On Wed, Jun 20, 2018 at 11:21 AM Vijay K. Gurbani > > > <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > > <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>> > > wrote: > > > > > > All: This email announces the WGLC for SSE [1]; the WGLC runs > > from Wed, > > > Jun 20, 2018 to Wed, Jul 4, 2018. > > > > > > We will like the community members to perform an in-depth > > review of the > > > draft and post their comments, concerns or approval to the > > mailing list > > > during this period, even if it is one liner expressing support > for > > > moving the draft ahead. > > > > > > [1] > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-11 > > > > > > Thank you, > > > > > > - vijay > > > -- > > > Vijay K. Gurbani / [email protected] > > <mailto:[email protected]> > > > <mailto:[email protected] <mailto: > [email protected]>> > > > Network Data Science, Nokia Networks > > > Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > alto mailing list > > > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> <mailto:[email protected] > > <mailto:[email protected]>> > > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > > > > > > > > > > - vijay > > -- > > Vijay K. Gurbani / [email protected] > > <mailto:[email protected]> > > Network Data Science, Nokia Networks > > Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq > > > > > > > > -- > > -- > > ===================================== > > | Y. Richard Yang <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> | > > | Professor of Computer Science | > > | http://www.cs.yale.edu/~yry/ | > > ===================================== > > - vijay > -- > Vijay K. Gurbani / [email protected] > Network Data Science, Nokia Networks > Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq > -- -- ===================================== | Y. Richard Yang <[email protected]> | | Professor of Computer Science | | http://www.cs.yale.edu/~yry/ | =====================================
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