Hi Scott, Thanks for your review. About your questions, please see my answers inline.
Best regards, Jensen On Wed, Aug 25, 2021 at 10:08 PM Scott Bradner via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Scott Bradner > Review result: Ready > > This is an OPD-DIR review of ALTO Extension: Entity Property Maps > (draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new) > > review conclusion: Ready with questions > > This document describes extensions to the ALTO protocol to support > additional > functionality, as such this document describes technology that will make > operating a network better (not necessary easier since there is more to do) > > I did not find any particular operational issues issues > > two questions though > 1/ with language like the following > “this document specifies a protocol extension for defining and retrieving > ALTO > properties” and “The concept of an ALTO Entity generalizes the concept of > an > ALTO Endpoint defined in Section 2.1 of [RFC7285].” > > I would have assumed that the new RFC would update RFC 7285 but the header > of > the ID does not say that it updates anything - if this has already been > discussed and decided then fine but it sure looks like an update to me > For "update", my understanding is that the new document must change the existing specification in the original RFC. This document does not update RFC 7285 but just adds a new ALTO service like what RFC 8895 does. All the proposed extensions are just based on the existing service framework defined by RFC 7285. > > 2/ section 12.2 describes the "ALTO Entity Domain Registry" and > specifically > says that additions to the registry require "IETF Review" but section 12.3, > which describes the "ALTO Entity Type Registry" and says what info must be > included in any request to add items to the registry but does not say > what, if > any review is needed - leaving it open ended seems wrong to me > Thanks for the catch. You are right. Additions to both registries require "IETF Review". We will update Sec 12.3 to add this. > > Scott > > > >
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