Hi Murray, Thanks for your comments. Please see the authors' response inline.
Thanks, Jensen On Mon, Dec 6, 2021 at 3:44 PM Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker < [email protected]> wrote: > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-17: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I concur with Francesca's DISCUSS. > > Please provide at least one complete sentence in Sections 3.3, 3.4, 5.4, > 6.1.1.1, and 6.1.2.1. For example: > > There are no applicable Accept Input parameters. > That makes sense. We have added such sentences in the coming revision. Thanks. > > The "Interoperability considerations" part of Section 7.1 doesn't seem to > be a > complete answer to the corresponding guidance in Section 6.2 of RFC 6838. > > The authors will be appreciated if you can give any further comments or suggestions on this. For our understanding, the referenced sections in the registration table ("Specification" column) have described the structure and parsing of the corresponding messages. Are they not enough for the "Interoperability considerations"? Could you give any tips about what is missing here? Many thanks. > > > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
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