Hi  Qin,
Overall this looks fine to me. A few comments below:

On 03/12/2021 11:17, Qin Wu wrote:
> Hello,
> Here is the registration request of application/alto-* Media Types defined in 
> section 7.1 of draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-17.html
>  
> I’ve included the details below.
>  
> Note that this document has already entered into IESG review phase. Francesca 
> Palombini kindly reminds us and the authors of this draft to
> send the media type registrations to the media-type mailing list for review 
> before the document moves forward. Thanks Francesca.
>  
> -Qin (on behalf of chairs)
> 7.1. application/alto-* Media Types
> This document updates the IANA Media Types Registry by registering two 
> additional ALTO media types, listed in Table 1.
> 
> Table 1: Additional ALTO Media Types.
> Type
> Subtype
> Specification
> application
> alto-cdni+json
> Section 3 of RFCthis
> application
> alto-cdnifilter+json
> Section 5 of RFCthis
> Type name:
> application
> 
> Subtype name:
> This document registers multiple subtypes, as listed in Table 1.
> 
Existing media type registration template doesn’t allow registering multiple 
media types using the same template. So you will need to create multiple 
registrations.

Having said that, a few minor comments below:
> Required parameters:
> n/a
> 
> Optional parameters:
> n/a
> 
> Encoding considerations:
> Encoding considerations are identical to those specified for the 
> "application/json" media type. See [RFC8259].
> 
> Security considerations:
> Security considerations related to the generation and consumption of ALTO 
> Protocol messages are discussed in Section 15 of [RFC7285].
> 
> Interoperability considerations:
> This document specifies formats of conforming messages and the interpretation 
> thereof.
> 
This section is for known interoperability concerns. If you don’t know of any, 
putting N/A here is probably the best.
> Published specification:
> This document is the specification for these media types; see Table 1 for the 
> section documenting each media type.
> 
> Applications that use this media type:
> ALTO servers and ALTO clients either stand alone or are embedded within other 
> applications.
> 
Please add a reference to a document where ALTO is defined. Registration 
templates can be read by people who are not necessarily familiar with this 
technology.

Also when you split the registration template into 2 it would be good to have a 
sentence here explaining how the two formats differ.
> Additional information:
> Magic number(s):
> n/a
> 
> File extension(s):
> This document uses the mime type to refer to protocol messages and thus does 
> not require a file extension.
> 

I don’t think I agree with this statement, but not having a file extension is 
Ok. So just put “N/A” here.
> Macintosh file type code(s):
> n/a
> 
> Person & email address to contact for further information:
> See Authors' Addresses section.
> 
> Intended usage:
> COMMON
> 
> Restrictions on usage:
> n/a
> 
> Author:
> See Authors' Addresses section.
> 
> Change controller:
> Internet Engineering Task Force (mailto:[email protected]).
> 
>  
> 
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