It is quite frustrating to see the bootstrap draft be handled in a way that is impossible to track:
- it would have been better not to crearte anothrer branch that you can only be aware of by having seen this email - If you use a new branch, it would be great if you would have updated the IETF anima bootstrap wiki page with this information. - for the sake of the non-git experts amongst us, it would be great to also indicate some command how to retrieve this branch. I for once tried: git clone -b concise https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap and that totally did not work. So as of right now i am lost in how i should review this version of the document. Toerless On Tue, Apr 18, 2017 at 05:07:18PM +0000, Max Pritikin (pritikin) wrote: > > Peter, > > The current text is wordy and repetitive and says things more than once > <grin>. Primary focus is to remove repetitive text, tighten remaining text, > and consolidate normative statements. > > As an initial example the -05 draft has 3 main sections: > architectural overview > functional overview (contains design considerations discussions) > protocol details > The initial ???concise??? branch commit moves the functional overview to the > appendix. Subsequent commits are resolving normative texts that were in there > by moving needed bits back into the protocol discussion. You can follow along > via the git repository here: > https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/compare/concise > > There was a comment that the design considerations are useful and might be > appropriate to keep here or in another document. At the moment I don???t have > a formulated position on that. > > - max > > > On Apr 18, 2017, at 3:27 AM, peter van der Stok <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Hi Max, > > > > excellent idea. I looked at the present version, and there is still a lot > > of text. > > Where in the text do you want to reduce more? What is the end-objective? > > And will this become the final document, or is it a study that will be used > > later for editing the final document? > > > > Peter > > > > Max Pritikin (pritikin) schreef op 2017-04-15 00:34: > >> For those of you tracking the git repository please note the existence > >> of a new branch. As warned I???m significantly reducing the text. This > >> work is going on in the branch ???concise???. > >> _______________________________________________ > >> Anima mailing list > >> [email protected] > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima > > _______________________________________________ > Anima-bootstrap mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima-bootstrap -- --- [email protected] _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
