Deborah Brungard has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-anima-grasp-12: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-grasp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The comparison text to routing protocols is outdated as ignores TE which can support any link/node attribute desired (bandwidth, availability, latency, etc.), discovery, bidirectional negotiation for use, and autoconfiguration (e.g. RFC 5340). When first discussing automatic networks, it may have been useful to compare with routing, as at a very high level view, it may look similar, but I think it is no longer relevant, and very confusing for a routing person. Suggest instead of a "I'm more complex than you" approach, remove these paragraphs. A few minor edits will fix. Suggest to remove the first paragraph of Section 2.2. Or edit: 1. links are no longer simple: "consider simple link"/s/"consider link" 2. Delete from "nodes need a consistent, although partial, view of the network topology in order for the routing algorithm to converge. Also, routing is mainly based on simple information synchronization between peers, rather than on bi-directional negotiation." I think what you want to infer by "partial" is for a protocol instance/region. But there is support today for multi-layer and multi-region networks. And convergence scale is implementation. But none of this is relevant to anima so best is to delete vs. trying to fix. Appendix E Remove the paragraph on routing or preface with "Early routing protocols.." And the paragraph on RSVP is really not relevant for this comparison. Unless want to edit, as RSVP-TE does do "discovery". _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
