Here's my first comment on this draft. However, it is very long and I hope you can allow some extra delay.
As far as the two GRASP objectives are concerned, both "AN_ACP" and "SRV.est" look mainly OK and I have made a demonstration implementation of both of them. For example, the ASA pretending to be an established ACP node says things like: Flooding AN_ACP 17 500 and SRV.est 6 83 and the ASA pretending to be a new ACP node trying to join says things like: Found 1 result(s) for SRV.est SRV.est with locator fe80::c0da:ac17:5f6d:8e76 6 83 expiry 30693 Found 2 result(s) for AN_ACP AN_ACP with locator fe80::c0da:ac17:5f6d:8e76 17 500 expiry 30693 AN_ACP with locator fe80::c0da:ac17:5f6d:8e76 17 504 expiry 30753 I haven't uploaded this code to GitHub yet because it needs more testing. I do have a question about the value field of each of these objectives. They are both defined as "name of the (list of) of supported protocols" but the examples show a simple string. That needs to be more precise. Is it a string, a list of strings ["abc", "def"] or something else? And do the names need to be registered? That covers about 2 pages. I need a little more time for the other 104 pages. Regards Brian On 15/10/2017 21:59, Sheng Jiang wrote: > Hi all, > > This message starts the two-week ANIMA Working Group Last Call to advance > draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-12, An Autonomic Control Plane > (ACP). This document's intended status is Standards Track. At present, there > is one IPR file against this document, see below link. > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2407/ > > Please send your comments by October 28th, 2017. If you do not feel this > document should advance, please state your reasons why. > > Sheng JIANG is the assigned document shepherd. > > Regards, > > Sheng (co-chair, Toerless who as a co-author stayed neutral on the content > side) > > > > _______________________________________________ > Anima mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima > _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
