Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-10-11 IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-21 IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-25 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Informational RFC. I appreciate the author's work in addressing my concerns. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: The reference [IDevID] still appears to me to be a normative reference. In 3.3.3, the new parenthetical e.g. (replacing the wording "For example", seems to have no closing parenthesis. _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
