Brian, > On Oct 12, 2018, at 7:22 AM, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > Joel, > > On 2018-10-12 15:17, Joel Halpern wrote: > .... > >> Nits/editorial comments: >> The reference [IDevID] still appears to me to be a normative reference. > > It is normative in draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra, where it really > matters. Seems like a marginal point in an Informational document, but of > course > we'll follow the IESG's guidance.
Since draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra is a normative reference in this document, IDevID seems like it should be as well. That is, it seems to be used in a normative way in the same manner as the other normative references in this document. If the document were not going to have any normative references, then I think IDevID could be informative. Joel, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > >> In 3.3.3, the new parenthetical e.g. (replacing the wording "For example", >> seems to have no closing parenthesis. > > Ack. > > Thanks > Brian > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > gen-...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list Anima@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
