Hi, I have pushed -26 to the datatracker.
I believe that this addresses all IESG comments received, as well as the comments from Christian's second review. In particular, I added a paragraph to the intro as he suggested, as well as adding section 7.4.3, which is now referenced by section 10.6 ("meddling"). As previously indicated, when I fixed the wrap issue in the examples between -23 and -24, this resulted in a very unreadably wide diff. I posted -23 as having only that fix, so compare -26 to -24 if you want to see everything since your review. Here is a link to help: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-23&url2=draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-26 The new text is pending proof-reading by myself and others, but as you may know, it is impossible to catch small errors in this text. Will Randy be happy? I hope so :-) This is has been a very long effort for me and my co-authors, about 75 hours of effort, occupying most of my brain for a month. If substantive are still needed, they won't occur until mid-September. There is still perhaps the somewhat "minor" issue of whether we should have a registry created for the /.well-known/est. It feels like overkill to me. I'm not sure if my instructions clearly say to add "see also " to the related information. I reviewed some of the documents referenced under "related information", and I did not see any instructions in them. -- ] Never tell me the odds! | ipv6 mesh networks [ ] Michael Richardson, Sandelman Software Works | IoT architect [ ] m...@sandelman.ca http://www.sandelman.ca/ | ruby on rails [
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