Hi, I realise this is already in "RFC Ed Queue : MISSREF", but what's the plan 
for fixing the errors noted below?

Regards
   Brian Carpenter

On 28-Apr-20 13:44, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Again thanks to Michael Richardson, here are some important nits in the GRASP 
> examples in the BRSKI draft. The CDDL syntax is correct, but the examples 
> need to be corrected as below. The errors are in nesting levels within the 
> flood message, just two pairs of missing [].
> 
> I believe these can be corrected editorially, but the authors and shepherd 
> need to take action, since the draft is in the RFC Editor queue.
> 
> In Figure 11:
> 
> OLD:
> 
>    [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe800000000000000000000000000001', 180000,
>                ["AN_Proxy", 4, 1, ""],
>                [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fe800000000000000000000000000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 4443]]
> 
> In Figure 12:
> 
> NEW:
> 
>    [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe800000000000000000000000000001', 180000,
>               [["AN_Proxy", 4, 1, ""],
>                [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fe800000000000000000000000000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 4443]]]
> 
> In Figure 12:
> 
> OLD:
> 
>    [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fda379a6f6ee00000200000064000001', 180000,
>                ["AN_join_registrar", 4, 255, "EST-TLS"],
>                [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fda379a6f6ee00000200000064000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 8443]]
>         ]
> 
> NEW:
> 
>    [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fda379a6f6ee00000200000064000001', 180000,
>               [["AN_join_registrar", 4, 255, "EST-TLS"],
>                [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
>                  h'fda379a6f6ee00000200000064000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 8443]]
>         ]
> 
> Regards
>    Brian
> 

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