RFC-editor, the diffs against XML (v3) for this document can be found at: https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/commit/3b70d50bab007f90fed971fdcc48ca96482a8d46#diff-f0a44b214cc91a0645f06f65da3e26b6
WG: I have posted these changes to the github, and I could post the XML as -42 if told to, but I don't want to confuse anyone. There are a four missing trailing periods fixed, btw. There is some change in the reference file for ietf-netconf-keystore, which I think is the result of a bug in the reference.foobar files (out of my control). See the line 5736 diff. I don't think the reference file should have that <t>, but I think the XML->TXT throws that out, but the XML is authoritative now... Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> wrote: > Again thanks to Michael Richardson, here are some important nits in the > GRASP examples in the BRSKI draft. The CDDL syntax is correct, but the > examples need to be corrected as below. The errors are in nesting > levels within the flood message, just two pairs of missing []. I have updated the github and the generated XML (these examples were split off into mostly easily maintained files). tom petch <[email protected]> wrote: > I note that part of the formal specification is in CDDL and while other > DDL - ASN.1, SMI, YANG - are bracketed with CODE BEGINS CODE ENDS - the > CDDL is not. I suspect that it should be - perhaps a note to the RFC > Editor is called for. This mechanism is a homebrew insert-figures routine, and it didn't consider CDDL. I have renamed the files to .cddl, and adjusted the insert-figures. > In the Security Considerations I encounter MTIM which I suspect should > be MITM (and which needs expanding on first use in s.5). > In the YANG module, I see two references in square brackets which > suggests that they are in XML/HTML and not plain text whereas there is > a requirement for YANG modules to be in plain text so that they can be > extracted from the RFC. If you are looking at the HTML-ized tools-version of the document, then it expands all sorts of things. All of the YANG is text as far as I can see. -- Michael Richardson <[email protected]>, Sandelman Software Works -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-
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