Hi, Brian Thanks for your guidance materials. This is of great benefit to improve the draft.
I agree with you that the description of the use case is too abstract. As I said in the last mail, our next version of the improvement plan is to add a more detailed description. And in my thought, the detailed description of the draft will help the WG participant to do an open source prototype. Best regards Yujing -----Original Message----- From: Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> Sent: 2021年11月17日 4:55 To: [email protected]; Toerless Eckert <[email protected]>; [email protected] Subject: Re: [Anima] Call for adoption: draft-dang-anima-network-service-auto-deployment I agree with Med that the description of the use case is too abstract. I always try to look at use cases as a programmer: what would I put in my program to implement this? So I think the next version should tackle this, possibly as an appendix. Give several specific examples of [restype, resval] (there are some hints in section 5) and a procedural description of the resource management process for those examples. Note that the procedural description in https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-03.html#name-example-logic-flows was constructed from a prototype implementation of RFC8992. If some WG participant wants to do an open source prototype of anima-network-service-auto-deployment, that might be a good way to proceed. See step 3 at https://xkcd.com/2530/ . That said, I think this work is ready for WG adoption. Regards Brian Carpenter On 16-Nov-21 20:56, [email protected] wrote: > Hi all, > > I do see a value in documents that exercise how GRASP can be used in specific > contexts. The authors can follow the structure in RFC8992 to better describe > the target case, the theory of operation, etc. > > FWIW, some quick comments to the authors can be seen at: > > * pdf: > https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/master > /draft-dang-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-01-rev%20Med.pdf > * doc: > https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-dang > -anima-network-service-auto-deployment-01-rev%20Med.doc > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Anima <[email protected]> De la part de Toerless Eckert >> Envoyé : mardi 16 novembre 2021 03:17 À : [email protected] Objet : >> [Anima] Call for adoption: draft-dang-anima-network-service-auto- >> deployment >> >> The authors of draft-dang-anima-network-service-auto-deployment have >> asked ANIMA WG for adoption of the work. >> >> Given how we are probably all still exhausted from IETF112, let me >> give this one a bit more time: >> >> This emails starts a three week call for adoption for >> draft-dang-anima- network-service-auto-deployment The adoption call >> does end when December 6 has passed for everyone on planet earth. >> >> draft-dang-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-01 >> >> Abstract >> >> This document specifies an autonomic mechanism for resource-based >> network services deployment through the Autonomic Control Plane (ACP) >> in an Autonomic Network. This mechanism uses the GRASP in [RFC8990] >> to exchange the information among the autonomic nodes so that the >> resource among the service path can be coordinated. >> >> So, please check out the document and chime in! >> >> Toerless, for the ANIMA chairs. >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Anima mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima > > ______________________________________________________________________ > ___________________________________________________ > > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, > exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message > par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi > que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles > d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete > altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. > > This message and its attachments may contain confidential or > privileged information that may be protected by law; > they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. > If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete > this message and its attachments. > As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been > modified, changed or falsified. > Thank you. > > _______________________________________________ > Anima mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima > . > _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
