Hi all,
I support adoption.
(1)(major) However, I think that ietf-voucher module should be reworked to make
use of the structure defined in RFC 8791.
(2) For the IANA section, even if ietf-voucher was already registered, the
practice is that the IANA will need to create a new entry when the new version
of the module will be published. That IANA section should ne updated
accordingly.
(3) This part from the IANA module should be updated as follows:
OLD:
organization
"IETF ANIMA Working Group";
contact
"WG Web: <https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/anima/>
WG List: <mailto:[email protected]>
Author: Kent Watsen
<mailto:[email protected]>
Author: Max Pritikin
<mailto:[email protected]>
Author: Michael Richardson
<mailto:[email protected]>
Author: Toerless Eckert
<mailto:[email protected]>";
NEW:
organization
"IANA";
contact
"Internet Assigned Numbers Authority
Postal: ICANN
12025 Waterfront Drive, Suite 300
Los Angeles, CA 90094-2536
United States of America
Tel: +1 310 301 5800
<mailto:[email protected]>";
(4) Make IANA's actions easy to handle:
OLD:
name: iana-voucher-assertion-type
namespace: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:iana-voucher-assertion-type
prefix: ianavat
reference: RFC XXXX
NEW:
name: iana-voucher-assertion-type
namespace: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:iana-voucher-assertion-type
prefix: ianavat
maintained by IANA: Y
reference: RFC XXXX
(5)
OLD
This document registers a new media type in the "Media Types"
registry [RFC6838]. IANA has registered the following:
NEW:
This document requests IANA to update the following "Media Types"
entry to point to the RFC number that will be assigned
to this document:
(6)
OLD:
IANA has registered the following OID in the "SMI Security for S/MIME
CMS Content Type (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1)" registry:
Decimal Description References
------- -------------------------------------- ----------
40 id-ct-animaJSONVoucher RFC 8366
NEW:
This document requests IANA to update this registered OID in the
"SMI Security for S/MIME CMS Content Type (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1)"
registry to point to the RFC number to be assigned to this document:
Decimal Description References
------- -------------------------------------- ----------
40 id-ct-animaJSONVoucher RFC XXXX
(7) (many occurrences)
OLD:
reference "RFC ZZZZ: Voucher Profile for Bootstrapping Protocols";
NEW:
reference
"RFC XXXX: A Voucher Artifact for Bootstrapping Protocols";
(8) Consider adding an appendix to list the main changes vs. 8366.
Thank you.
Cheers,
Med
De : Anima <[email protected]> De la part de Sheng Jiang
Envoyé : lundi 6 décembre 2021 07:57
À : [email protected]
Cc : [email protected]; Toerless Eckert <[email protected]>
Objet : [Anima] Call for adoption: draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis, ends
December 19th, 2021
Hi, all ANIMAer,
This message starts a two-week adoption call for
draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis, which we have traced a few discussion and
think the WG is interested in. The adoption call ends December 19th, 2021.
Title: A Voucher Artifact for Bootstrapping Protocols
Name: draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis-04
Authors: K. Watsen, M. Richardson, M. Pritikin and T. Eckert
URL: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis/
IPR: No IPR disclosures have been submitted directly on
draft-richardson-anima-voucher-delegation
This document is intended to become a standards track ANIMA WG document.
Please express your support or rejection. If you think this document should
_not_ be adopted, please also explicitly indicate the reasons.
Regards,
Sheng
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