On Fri, Dec 10, 2021 at 9:31 AM <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
>
>
> I support adoption.
>
>
>
> (1)(major) However, I think that ietf-voucher module should be reworked to
> make use of the structure defined in RFC 8791.
>
>
>
> (2) For the IANA section, even if ietf-voucher was already registered, the
> practice is that the IANA will need to create a new entry when the new
> version of the module will be published. That IANA section should ne
> updated accordingly.
>
>
>
> (3) This part from the IANA module should be updated as follows:
>
>
>
> OLD:
>
>      organization
>
>        "IETF ANIMA Working Group";
>
>      contact
>
>        "WG Web:   <https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/anima/>
>
>         WG List:  <mailto:[email protected]>
>
>         Author:   Kent Watsen
>
>                   <mailto:[email protected]>
>
>         Author:   Max Pritikin
>
>                   <mailto:[email protected]>
>
>         Author:   Michael Richardson
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>                   <mailto:[email protected]>
>
>         Author:   Toerless Eckert
>
>                   <mailto:[email protected]>";
>
>
>



> NEW:
>
>   organization
>
>     "IANA";
>
>   contact
>
>     "Internet Assigned Numbers Authority
>
>
>
>      Postal: ICANN
>
>              12025 Waterfront Drive, Suite 300
>
>              Los Angeles, CA 90094-2536
>
>              United States of America
>
>      Tel:    +1 310 301 5800
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>      <mailto:[email protected]>";
>
>
>
> (4) Make IANA’s actions easy to handle:
>
>
>

I didn't know that we have to write IANA (ICANN) postal address in the
drafts.
To my knowledge ICANN is in Washington, DC, but I may be wrong.


Behcet


> OLD:
>
>    name:         iana-voucher-assertion-type
>
>    namespace:    urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:iana-voucher-assertion-type
>
>    prefix:       ianavat
>
>    reference:    RFC XXXX
>
>
>
> NEW:
>
>    name:         iana-voucher-assertion-type
>
>    namespace:    urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:iana-voucher-assertion-type
>
>    prefix:       ianavat
>
>    maintained by IANA: Y
>
>    reference:    RFC XXXX
>
>
>
> (5)
>
>
>
> OLD
>
>    This document registers a new media type in the "Media Types"
>
>    registry [RFC6838].  IANA has registered the following:
>
>
>
> NEW:
>
>   This document requests IANA to update the following "Media Types"
>
>   entry to point to the RFC number that will be assigned
>
>   to this document:
>
>
>
> (6)
>
>
>
> OLD:
>
>    IANA has registered the following OID in the "SMI Security for S/MIME
>
>    CMS Content Type (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1)" registry:
>
>
>
>              Decimal  Description                             References
>
>              -------  --------------------------------------  ----------
>
>              40       id-ct-animaJSONVoucher                  RFC 8366
>
>
>
>
>
> NEW:
>
>    This document requests IANA to update this  registered OID in the
>
>    "SMI Security for S/MIME CMS Content Type (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1)"
>
>    registry to point to the RFC number to be assigned to this document:
>
>
>
>              Decimal  Description                             References
>
>              -------  --------------------------------------  ----------
>
>              40       id-ct-animaJSONVoucher                  RFC XXXX
>
>
>
> (7) (many occurrences)
>
>
>
> OLD:
>
> reference "RFC ZZZZ: Voucher Profile for Bootstrapping Protocols";
>
>
>
> NEW:
>
>   reference
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>     "RFC XXXX: A Voucher Artifact for Bootstrapping Protocols";
>
>
>
> (8) Consider adding an appendix to list the main changes vs. 8366.
>
>
>
> Thank you.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Med
>
>
>
> *De :* Anima <[email protected]> *De la part de* Sheng Jiang
> *Envoyé :* lundi 6 décembre 2021 07:57
> *À :* [email protected]
> *Cc :* [email protected]; Toerless Eckert <[email protected]>
> *Objet :* [Anima] Call for adoption: draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis,
> ends December 19th, 2021
>
>
>
> Hi, all ANIMAer,
>
>
>
> This message starts a two-week adoption call for
> draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis, which we have traced a few discussion
> and think the WG is interested in. The adoption call ends December 19th,
> 2021.
>
>
>
> Title:   A Voucher Artifact for Bootstrapping Protocols
>
> Name:     draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis-04
>
>
>
> Authors:  K. Watsen, M. Richardson, M. Pritikin and T. Eckert
>
> URL:      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-richardson-anima-rfc8366bis/
>
> IPR:      No IPR disclosures have been submitted directly on 
> draft-richardson-anima-voucher-delegation
>
>
>
> This document is intended to become a standards track ANIMA WG document.
>
>
>
> Please express your support or rejection. If you think this document should 
> _not_ be adopted, please also explicitly indicate the reasons.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> Sheng
>
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