Hi Michael, Thank you again for the review and the proposed changes. I meanwhile included your proposed changes and also addressed most of the issues you raised. The results have been captured n the github discussion of open issues (https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/issues). The newest version is also available in this github. The remaining open issues are for discussion tomorrow in the Design Team. Most of them are already prepared.
Best regards Steffen > -----Original Message----- > From: Anima <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Fries, Steffen > Sent: Dienstag, 20. September 2022 15:08 > To: Michael Richardson <[email protected]>; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [Anima] comments on anima-brski-prm > > Hi Michael, > > I put my comments inline. > > Best regards > Steffen > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Anima <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Michael Richardson > > Sent: Montag, 19. September 2022 17:50 > > Subject: [Anima] comments on anima-brski-prm > > > > I should remind people that git hates trailing whitespace, and please > > configure your editors to remove. I use emacs, and I have some code I > > use, but most editors now have an option. So some diffs you may see > > are just trailing space removal, which I guess I could have done on > main/master. > I'll keep this in mind ;-) > > > > > I made a whole bunch of small editorial fixes, which I collected at: > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717697707%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=c > %2B%2FP > > pAIGKEXRss90QdiDk%2BoLYwnJ8ewkdtpF6IOXyLw%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fpull%2F76&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C1 > > > e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55 > > > a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576757266%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIj > > > oiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C200 > > > 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991995576757266%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLC > > > JQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C2000%7C%7C%7C& > > > sdata=D8HognvCph6bT2gaA9FyNfTV%2BBLO0Mgg5uBakmVGbgc%3D&res > > erved=0 > > provides for easier review. > > In many cases I just split up long paragraphs into more digestable parts. > > > Thanks, that definitely increases readability. > > > ** If it would help discussion for me to split these up into a bunch > > of separate > > ** pull requests, I can do that. > > > > I tweaked many of the diagrams so that aasvg would produce beautiful > > HTML/PDF. > Didn't know that, but it definitely looks better. > > > > > I also opened the following issues: > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717697707%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=c > %2B%2FP > > pAIGKEXRss90QdiDk%2BoLYwnJ8ewkdtpF6IOXyLw%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fissues%2F75&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7 > > > C1e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d > > 55a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576913478%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJ > > > WIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C > > > 2000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=kIownLfpv8NHsWec0QlDX6JGe%2BSYY7LPKwDx > > XIV%2BPoE%3D&reserved=0: misuse of mDNS > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717853913%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XI > bzbqYS > > SwO%2B4N8zQOQlX890%2BTulkX9dbkoSTLzszLc%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fissues%2F74&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7 > > > C1e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d > > 55a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576913478%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJ > > > WIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C > > > 2000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=b3kAxL1qQi9869RrZI9KGxQ7rD6cDBkBJXwT4ACo > > o7k%3D&reserved=0: what is the threat for registrar-agent mis-use > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717853913%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XI > bzbqYS > > SwO%2B4N8zQOQlX890%2BTulkX9dbkoSTLzszLc%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fissues%2F73&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7 > > > C1e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d > > 55a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576913478%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJ > > > WIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C > > > 2000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=PiIO9RNg6aYPgBScPHL%2BqNiyllVtTg9kgGfwL% > > 2F8UTjI%3D&reserved=0: pledge-status responses are cumullative right? > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717853913%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XI > bzbqYS > > SwO%2B4N8zQOQlX890%2BTulkX9dbkoSTLzszLc%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fissues%2F72&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7 > > > C1e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d > > 55a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576913478%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJ > > > WIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C > > > 2000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=lPJkOeKI%2FrMTIT3kdwoYH09opqZzcGWP19zPZ > > EgzEzc%3D&reserved=0: section 5.5 is foreshadowed/repeated > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717853913%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XI > bzbqYS > > SwO%2B4N8zQOQlX890%2BTulkX9dbkoSTLzszLc%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fissues%2F71&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7 > > > C1e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d > > 55a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576913478%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJ > > > WIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C > > > 2000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=o4ofsd6h0Ee8o7FTSTCjw0oqRMNChuttyUyot%2 > > BkzdyU%3D&reserved=0: more tweaks need for ts diagram > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717853913%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XI > bzbqYS > > SwO%2B4N8zQOQlX890%2BTulkX9dbkoSTLzszLc%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fissues%2F70%3Awhy&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens. > > > com%7C1e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42 > > > e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576913478%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3 > > > d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3 > > > 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2000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=rqlw%2Fvk5bWr0yr%2B%2FY5Sc1Ytr4q1O6KOvQ > > DSZatwLhhg%3D&reserved=0: > > shorten the pledge end points > We defined BRSKI-PRM in the first place to be close to BRSKI and thus used > descriptive names for the endpoints. In the constraint BRSKI document > shortened names have been specified. We intended the same approach for > BRSKI-PRM- > > > > > in constrained-voucher, we wind up shortening all the end-points, so I > > wonder if we shouldn't just shorten the ones used in PRM *now* so that > > they can work with CoAP over BTLE, when we get to that stage? > > > > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgith > > > ub.co%2F&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7C28dece81 > 9008 > > > 432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0% > 7C6379 > > > 92760717853913%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJ > QIjoiV2l > > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XI > bzbqYS > > SwO%2B4N8zQOQlX890%2BTulkX9dbkoSTLzszLc%3D&reserved=0 > > m%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski- > > > prm%2Fissues%2F66&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7 > > > C1e3b4e1da3b64d7c39c608da9a56a8c2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d > > 55a%7C1%7C0%7C637991995576913478%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJ > > > WIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C > > > 2000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=rGzWB8LNmAu9rNBVXK9wGNs0ucMJWsSFJswm > > bME0Uek%3D&reserved=0: reference to registrar as LDevID(Reg) The > > Registrar certificate is referred to as LDevID(Reg), and I'm not entirely > > sure why. Yes, it could and probably should be issued by the Enterprise > > CA, > > but I don't think it has to be. It's just the Registrar Certificate. > > It actually should have the cmcRA EKU set, so it's not just an ordinary > > LDevID. > > Am I missing something here? > Yes, right, the registrar certificate may be an EE certificate, as it may not > be > necessarily traced back to an IDevID. > Also the setting of the id-kp-cmcRA EKU needs to be mentioned as to be handled > in the same way as in RFC 8995 > > > > > Hope to talk to you all on Tuesday evening. > Yes, will be there. > > > > > > > -- > > Michael Richardson <[email protected]>, Sandelman Software Works > > -= > > IPv6 IoT consulting =- > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Anima mailing list > [email protected] > https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf > .org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fanima&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%4 > 0siemens.com%7C28dece819008432aa88508da9b091efb%7C38ae3bcd95794fd > 4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C637992760717853913%7CUnknown%7CTW > FpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI > 6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=93ZMpJw23lwgNWMl8eGaJvIkKqc > N3OHzV8uGV1jySG0%3D&reserved=0 _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
