Michael,
I've trivially tweaked the spacing and changed a full stop to a comma.
Does this look right? If so, I will verify this errata.
Section 4.3 says:
objective-value = text ; name of the (list of) supported
; protocols: "EST-TLS" for RFC 7030.
It should say:
objective-value = text ; name of the supported protocol,
; e.g., "EST-TLS" for RFC 7030.
Regards,
Rob
-----Original Message-----
From: Michael Richardson <[email protected]>
Sent: Thursday, November 9, 2023 8:16 AM
To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <[email protected]>; Rebecca VanRheenen
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Cc: Max Pritikin (pritikin) <[email protected]>; [email protected];
[email protected]; Kent Watsen <[email protected]>;
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Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8995 (7576)
Rebecca VanRheenen <[email protected]> wrote:
> We are unable to verify this erratum that the submitter marked as
> editorial. Please note that we have changed the “Type” of the
> following errata report to “Technical”. As Stream Approver, please
> review and set the Status and Type accordingly (see the definitions at
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata-definitions/).
I filed this report after some discussion on the list.
It fixes a comment, rather than the underlying CDDL.
So I agree that it's not strictly editorial.
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>> On Jul 26, 2023, at 9:33 AM, RFC Errata System
>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8995,
>> "Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructure (BRSKI)".
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7576
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial Reported by: Michael Richardson
>> <[email protected]>
>>
>> Section: 4.3
>>
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> objective-value = text ; name of the (list of) supported ; protocols:
>> "EST-TLS" for RFC 7030.
>>
>>
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> objective-value = text ; name of the supported protocols. ; e.g.,
>> "EST-TLS" for RFC 7030.
>>
>>
>> Notes
>> -----
>> This objective does not support a list of supported protocols. The
>> comment in the example might lead people to conclude they can do that.
>>
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>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC8995 (draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-45)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title : Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructure (BRSKI)
>> Publication Date : May 2021 Author(s) : M. Pritikin, M. Richardson,
>> T. Eckert, M. Behringer, K. Watsen Category : PROPOSED STANDARD Source
>> : Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach Area : Operations
>> and Management Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG
>>
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