John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12: No Objection

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Thanks for this document. I have two minor comments/nits:

- please alphabetize your terminology section.

- in, “The following terms are described partly in addition.”

I don’t know what you mean by “partly“. Would the sentence be correct if you 
deleted that word?



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