Many thanks Al.

Regards, Benoit
All,
a few replies in-line below,
Al

-----Original Message-----
From: Benoit Claise [mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: Thursday, May 19, 2016 5:38 AM
To: The IESG
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MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)
Subject: Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11:
(with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: Discuss

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DISCUSS:
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Has a RFC6390 performance directorate review done for the 2.X metrics?
It
should.
[ACM]
I reviewed this draft about 18 months ago.
Mostly, it points to existing RFCs for fundamental metrics,
and discusses others.  I read this:
    ...This document provides characterization guidelines that
    can be used to assess the deployability of an AQM, whether it is
    candidate for standardization at IETF or not.
as restricted to lab testing.

See http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/performance-metrics.html
I guess that the metrics will be recorded in the future (See
draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-06
), right?
[ACM]
That's up to the authors, they might simply point to
metrics in the registry contributed by others
(when following these guidelines at a future time).
For example, Flow Completion Time and Packet Loss Synchronization are
new, I believe.
[ACM]
Flow Completion Time is close to a definition for a new metric,
and could benefit from more attention, perhaps a few more details.
RFC6390 will provide some areas for improvement.

Packet loss sync full methodology is described in [JAY006],
according to the text.

And some other metrics are already documented in RFC6390 compliant
documents. Pointers should be provided.
[ACM]
Most others are discussion sections and provide references.

See
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-
discard-01#appendix-A
for an example


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COMMENT:
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- Random Early Detection (RED), BLUE, and Proportional Integral
controller (PI)
Would you have references?

- BDP is mentioned a few times. Please expand.

- Glossary section = terminology section, right? If we want to be
consistent across documents

- section 12.2. Why not a MUST below?
    In order to understand an AQM's deployment considerations and
    performance under a specific environment, AQM proposals SHOULD
    describe the parameters that control the macroscopic AQM behavior,
    and identify any parameters that require tuning to operational
    conditions.


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