That works for me.

Owen


> On Oct 21, 2021, at 19:06 , Chris Woodfield <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> I think Joe’s got a good suggestion that I would support - define 
> “transferable number resources” as IPv4 addresses and ASNs in Section 2, and 
> go from there.
> 
> -C
> 
>> On Oct 21, 2021, at 5:39 PM, Martin Hannigan <[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On Thu, Oct 21, 2021 at 14:53 Chris Woodfield <[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>> I support this edit, for same reasons others have mentioned. 
>> 
>> If I’m recalling yesterday’s presentation correctly, it was ARIN Staff and 
>> Legal, not the AC, that determined that this language could not be 
>> implemented an editorial change, so that’s not up for debate here.
>> 
>> One possible adjustment that I’d like to suggest is that the term “IPv4 
>> and/or ASN resources” seems a bit awkward, given how many times it appears 
>> in the section. Perhaps we could add a new section that incorporates David’s 
>> suggested language, but also handles the clarification of the definition of 
>> number resources in a single place, scoped to Section 8.
>> 
>> So, a new Section 8.1.1, which I’d propose would be named “Definitions”, 
>> could read as follows:
>> 
>> 
>>      All references to “number resources" in this section, unless stated 
>> otherwise, refer to IPv4 addresses and/or ASN resources. 
>> 
>>      When number resources of multiple types, including IPv6 resources, are 
>> transferred, each resource type is considered separately and independently, 
>> both for any conditions on their transferability and the application of any 
>> restrictions following a transfer.
>> 
>> 
>> Following this, the other edits to Section 8 in the proposal can simply be 
>> changed to “number resources” to suit.
>> 
>> Opinions?
>> 
>> -C
>> 
>> We’d be better off using defined terms. Easier to construct, but end up 
>> being document global. 
>> 
>> Warm regards,
>> 
>> -M<
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> On Oct 21, 2021, at 11:23 AM, Martin Hannigan <[email protected] 
>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> 
>>> I agree with Owen re: the editorial nature of the changes. However, I 
>>> support it moving forward. I don't support the Farmer suggestion. That is 
>>> possibly a material change that should undergo the rigors of "the process" 
>>> on its own.
>>> 
>>> Warm regards,
>>> 
>>> -M<
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On Thu, Oct 21, 2021 at 11:33 AM Owen DeLong via ARIN-PPML 
>>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>> I support this amendment.
>>> 
>>> Owen
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On Oct 20, 2021, at 12:45 , David Farmer via ARIN-PPML <[email protected] 
>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> I support this proposal as currently written. 
>>>> 
>>>> However, regarding Kevin Blumberg's comment at the ARIN 48 discussion of 
>>>> this policy earlier today; How about adding a paragraph like the following 
>>>> to section 8.1, Principles;
>>>> 
>>>> When number resources of multiple types, IPv4, IPv6, and/or ASNs, are 
>>>> transferred, each resource type is considered separately and 
>>>> independently, both for any conditions on their transferability and the 
>>>> application of any restrictions following a transfer.
>>>> 
>>>> Something like this added to Section 8.1, Principles, along with the 
>>>> already proposed changes should eliminate any possibility of confusion in 
>>>> this regard.
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks
>>>> 
>>>> On Tue, Aug 24, 2021 at 7:52 AM ARIN <[email protected] 
>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>> On 19 August 2021, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) accepted "ARIN-prop-299: 
>>>> Clarifications to Sections 8.3, 8.4 and 8.5.6" as a Draft Policy.
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Draft Policy ARIN-2021-4 is below and can be found at:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2021_4/ 
>>>> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2021_4/>
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> You are encouraged to discuss all Draft Policies on PPML. The AC will 
>>>> evaluate the discussion in order to assess the conformance of this draft 
>>>> policy with ARIN's Principles of Internet number resource policy as stated 
>>>> in the Policy Development Process (PDP). Specifically, these principles 
>>>> are:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> * Enabling Fair and Impartial Number Resource Administration
>>>> 
>>>> * Technically Sound
>>>> 
>>>> * Supported by the Community
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> The PDP can be found at:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ 
>>>> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/>
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at: 
>>>> 
>>>> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ 
>>>> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/>
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Regards,
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Sean Hopkins
>>>> 
>>>> Senior Policy Analyst
>>>> 
>>>> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> Draft Policy ARIN-2021-4: Clarifications to Sections 8.3, 8.4 and 8.5.6  
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> Problem Statement:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> The current language in Sections 8.3 and 8.4 is not clear regarding 
>>>> ASN-only transactions as well as the term “number resources”. The current 
>>>> language in Section 8.5.7 is not clear with regard to additional IPv4 
>>>> space.
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Policy statement:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> In Section 8.3:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Replace
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “In addition to transfers under section 8.2, IPv4 numbers resources and 
>>>> ASNs may be transferred according to the following conditions.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> with
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “In addition to transfers under section 8.2, IPv4 address and/or ASN 
>>>> resources may be transferred according to the following conditions.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Replace
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “The source entity must be the current registered holder of the IPv4 
>>>> address resources, and not be involved in any dispute as to the status of 
>>>> those resources.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> with
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “The source entity must be the current registered holder of the IPv4 
>>>> address and/or ASN resources, and not be involved in any dispute as to the 
>>>> status of those resources.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> In Section 8.4:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Replace
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “Inter-regional transfers of IPv4 number resources and ASNs may take place 
>>>> only via RIRs who agree to the transfer and share reciprocal, compatible 
>>>> needs-based policies.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> with
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “Inter-regional transfers of IPv4 addresses and/or ASN resources may take 
>>>> place only via RIRs who agree to the transfer and share reciprocal, 
>>>> compatible needs-based policies.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Replace
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “The source entity must be the current rights holder of the IPv4 address 
>>>> resources recognized by the RIR responsible for the resources, and not be 
>>>> involved in any dispute as to the status of those resources.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> with
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “The source entity must be the current rights holder of the IPv4 address 
>>>> and/or ASN resources recognized by the RIR responsible for the resources, 
>>>> and not be involved in any dispute as to the status of those resources.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> In Section 8.5.6:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Replace
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “Organizations with direct assignments or allocations from ARIN must have 
>>>> efficiently utilized at least 50% of their cumulative IPv4 address blocks 
>>>> in order to receive additional space. This includes all space reassigned 
>>>> to their customers.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> with
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> “Organizations with direct assignments or allocations from ARIN must have 
>>>> efficiently utilized at least 50% of their cumulative IPv4 address blocks 
>>>> in order to receive additional IPv4 space. This includes all IPv4 space 
>>>> reassigned to their customers.”
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Comments:
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> These changes were originally included in ARIN-edit-2021-1. Staff and 
>>>> Legal review of ARIN-edit-2021-1 on June 14, 2021 indicated that some 
>>>> changes were not editorial in nature. The editorial changes went forward 
>>>> in ARIN-edit-2021-1 and the non-editorial changes are included here.
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
>>>> Timetable for implementation: Immediate
>>>> 
>>>>  
>>>> 
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