On Wed, 2006-02-15 at 09:15 +0100, Asbjørn Ulsberg wrote:
> On Tue, 14 Feb 2006 23:45:39 +0100, Byrne Reese <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> 
> > Submitted for review:
> > http://www.intertwingly.net/wiki/pie/PaceNewLogo
> 
> Although I think the old one is rather boring, this new one doesn't flow  
> correctly in my eyes. My nit with it is probably that it tries to resemble  
> an "A", which is difficult to match with the lines of the neutrons in the  
> atom.

And the more you try to make it resemble an 'A', the closer you'll
probably get to the Anarchy symbol:
<http://images.google.com/images?q=%22anarchy+symbol%22+OR+%22anarchy
+logo%22>

That said, I do rather like the black-on-white variant with the
better-defined particles shown here:
http://www.majordojo.com/2006/02/a_new_logo_for_1.php

Some suggestions:

        - It would be much more convenient (given that it's so close
        already) if the logo's bounding box was square, rather than a
        nearly-square rectangle.

        - I noticed that the small version uses a heavier outline for
        the circle. This is an improvement, and the larger versions
        should use a somewhat heavier line for the circle as well
        (although you'll note that in the small version the circle is
        actually slightly thicker than the crossbar stroke, which
        doesn't work very well).
        
        - I think changing the particles' placement into an actual
        equilateral pentagon (it's nearly there right now) would give
        the design more subliminal stability.
        
        - Conversely, the stroke widths should be a more dynamic. As an
        example, see the logo for Elemental Software (before their '99
        acquisition by Macromedia):
        http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/brands/0002/1456/brand.gif

Overall, a very good job!

- Michael Bernstein

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